I recently read Persuasion by Jane Austen and then allowed myself to watch the movie. I was fortunate enough to find the movie for $5 at Target, but I’m generally a believer in books first (though sometimes that ruins the movie…). The book–I loved which led to research to find the best film adaptation. While doing this research, I discovered a war. So naturally I had to find the film I did not own and watch it. Below are my notes on the good and the bad for each version, and my opinion as to which one is better.
This was created by someone and for those who have actually seen the movies… or someone who knows the book and is looking to find a movie version to watch. (aka SPOILER and Occasional Vagueness alert)
1995
This is the version I found at Target and simply could not leave on the shelf. I was pleased to discover that this is generally viewed as the better of the two. I watched it first. So here we go:
GOOD:
1. Much of the dialogue is preserved.
2. The middle-class appear middle class.
3. The constancy speech and letter scene is well-done. Save the echo in the letter reading.
BAD:
1. Zero chemistry between Anne and Wentworth. I just don’t see it. Sometimes actors just don’t connect. This is, sadly, one of those times. And I like Cieran Hines and was excited to see him as Wentworth. Shame.
2. This lacks… charm and humor. Which doesn’t make sense to me, as it is a BBC version, but I have found this to be true of their Emma as well (their P&P is of course the best adaptation of an Austen novel). People are mistaken if they think Persuasion the book is not funny. Yes, it is very serious. But it is often laugh-aloud funny, and to remove the humor from the movie adaptation is to get Austen wrong.
3. Please explain to me why Anne virtually chases after Wentworth at the concert hall. For an Anne who stays in character for the majority of the film, this is so jarring–not to mention inappropriate in social order of the time. Did not happen and would not happen. Book Anne feels scandalous for moving down a seat. (In a way, this exaggeration happens in both. Does this mean they cancel each other out?)
4. Kiss in the middle of a carnival. Why these characters kiss in the middle of the very Regency street is beyond me. It doesn’t help that the kiss is stiff and awkward, lacking all affection. No, I don’t want them to make out. I didn’t even want them to kiss is public, especially given that Anne’s father hasn’t even been notified. But if you’re going to commit that kind of error, at least make it worthwhile. I could kiss my teddy bear with more passion. See #1.
Speaking of teddy bears… the random monkey carnival and then deserted street of Bath is both creepy and absurd. Unless it’s supposed to be a great symbol, I just don’t get it. And if it’s supposed to be a great symbol… epic fail.
5. And since I mentioned character, Anne is blatantly disrespectful to her father in reference to Mrs. Clay. But this happens in both versions and, though it would not happen in real life, I suppose they cancel each other out.
6. Mrs. Russell is alternately wicked and nice, She is nasty about Wentworth, but without any confidence to explain her change, she is reasonable about him toward Anne. After her harsh encounter earlier, this seems odd.
2007
I wanted to like this one more. It is clear that everything is more advanced, so whether it actually did or not, it appears to have a greater budget. I watched this second and after hearing of the faults of it and the debate surrounding it. But having just finished the book and bumped it above Sense and Sensibility to become my favorite Austen, I was going to watch with a discerning eye anyway.
Here’s where it succeeds.
GOOD:
1. The chemistry between Anne and Wentworth is much better is this version, for whatever reason.
2.(SPOILER) They show Wentworth when he realizes that he has given everyone the impression that he intends to marry Louisa Musgrove. This was a nice addition and well-acted.
3. Color schemes and outdoor scenery are beautiful.
4. I shouldn’t love it, but the moment in the shop when Anne introduces Wentworth to Mr. Elliot makes my night. Elliot’s face and reactions are hilarious. I love them.
5. While I’m on the topic, the scene immediately before the introduction is lovely. It shows some of the former ease in attachment between Anne and Wentworth and serves as a good contrast with the later scene at the concert when Wentworth is again unsure. This is good chemistry between actors.
6. The in-betweens are properly filled in. The audience gets the information that Anne receives in the books through third-parties by seeing it communicated through characters that we are familiar with. This is much better played off than in the 1995 version, which sometimes leaves pieces out and hopes the audience has read the book, or inserts it awkwardly and directly to the main characters.
7. After the epic-fail running through Bath scene (haha–the twelve-year-old in me just appreciated that sentence structure), the scene where Anne accepts Wentworth’s proposal was lovely (see gaping fish comment below). This scene captured the feeling of the book scene where Anne meets and walks home with Wentworth (therefore accepting him) for a cinematic audience. Clearly one look would be too little. But most-importantly, this scene makes me feel the way the book did, and that’s why it’s a winner.
BAD:
1. Anne has the constancy discussion with Benwick in Lyme. Wentworth does not overhear it, it is too short and much too early for it to be a logical result of Anne’s reflection or a logical contribution the to the plot. When this happened, I just shouted “why!” at my computer.
2. Anne is much too active. I hate to describe Anne as a passive character, but the 2007 Anne seems much more like Austen’s other heroines in her position in the house and her doing and saying much–things that she does not do or say in the novel and that, are in fact, out of character for her. This is naturally the result of the 2007 liberated women and films wanting to make women appear stronger to fend of the feminists (I consider myself a feminist. I’m just commenting on what I believe to be a reaction to misunderstandings of what feminism is, but that’s another post), but this is a completely gross misinterpretation of Anne’s character. Book Anne does not lack strength just because she is an ideal regency woman in manner and behavior, but possesses quiet strength.
3. Mary is mean. Mary in this version is mean to the point of me wanting to off her. In the novel she is ridiculous and selfish and silly, but not deliberately nasty, which is the way she comes off in the film. The same could be said for Anne’s father. Sir Walter comes off as mean rather than haughty and selfish–yes, there is a clear difference.
4. (SPOILER) Louisa Musgrove runs to the top of the wall and shouts “Catch me.” then immediately adds “I am quite determined!” before anyone actually protests her jumping down. This is a silly little complaint, but it struck me as absurd and pulled me out of the film.
5. Again, this is nitpicky, but why do all the men look like they gelled their hair with the hope of joining a boy band?
6. Anne cries too much. May be a personal thing, but I like her quiet suffering and quiet strength. Crying is unattractive and not something I pictured her doing this much.
7. Everyone pays Anne way too much attention. They’re supposed to ignore her.
8. Until they meet in Bath, I fail to see the bloom that returns to Anne and the suspicion of returned attraction of the high regard Wentworth holds her in.
9. Really? Anne runs after Wentworth at the concert in this version too? Why doesn’t she just strip off her clothes. It’s supposed to make for good drama, I suppose, but it is so wrong that I have a hard time moving past it.
10. Running running, Anne just keep running. If you’ve seen the movie, you will understand.
11. Captain Wentworth leaves Anne at a walking pace, somehow manages to beat a running Anne and write her a note and leaves again, giving the note to someone else to deliver… okay. So, he could have written it beforehand. But, he’s going to trust his future hopes to chance? To someone else? After everything else that has happened? And after leaving Anne and possibly writing her a note, he goes immediately back to meet Anne… whose to say his letter has even been delivered. Absurd. Not to mention confusing.
12. A little too much gaping fish mouth by Anne. It ruined the kiss, which came after a lovely scene.
In the end, I doubt that I would choose to own either, if I didn’t already have the one version. And I believe, despite it having more flaws, I would choose to watch the 2007 version if I owned both, because the spirit of the novel is occasionally captured. Also, Wentworth is very nice to look at. In the end? Just read the book.
If you’re a television or film producer, read the book and build a team to produce a new movie version… then cast me as Anne. I’ll be waiting for that call. Seriously.